This is a quick document that we wrote as a group, incorporating all previous thoughts and ideas for the storyline of the script. As we have limited time this afternoon, we quickly drafted the following, but have all agreed...
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The scene starts with an introduction of 4 acquaintances, each preparing for the following.
Another of their acquaintances is busy staking a whole lot of money in a very important poker game with some enemies.
As the scene progresses, the men make their way towards the building where the poker game is taking place.
The separate acquaintance starts to become greedy, which is shown on screen, and the enemies become annoyed. Once he wins all of the money, one of the enemies stands up and points the gun directly at him; at which point the garage door opens and the 4 suited men come in.. it's a standoff.
The rest of the film progresses as follows:
The story goes back to the beginning, where the 5 colleagues are very good gamblers (they cheat.. etc).
The one man becomes very greedy, and is thrown out of the group by the rest of the members.
He then becomes very poor., and lives a sad sad life.
After being homeless, he inherits allot of money and promises himself never to gamble again.
However, he starts betting very small amounts, and eventually calls his old friends back up to see if they want to accept him back into the large group as they will get allot of money out of it!
At the end of the fill,,. the initial scene replays..
It turns out that the men open the door, and kill literally everyone inside. They also kill their friend, getting revenge and stealing all of the money.
