My Brief Idea/Script

Deciding as a group, we have chosen to choose between a mixture of ideas number #3, #7 and #9. We have all agreed to take time to create a brief plan for the two minutes of our film, as we all had various concepts and interpretations about how we would like the film to be.

This initially starts off by displaying characters, smartly dressed outside of an old/derelict building. Here, the camera is able to cut to around 3 or 4 characters, each one, acting in a way that best describes how they would behave before doing a ‘job’. I have an idea that each one will be doing something different, for example…

• Reading a newspaper
• Preparing the car
• Loading/arming the gun
• Smoking
• On the phone
• Having a drink
  

I think it would be a great idea for each character to be introduced with their name... similar to how it was on Tarantino's, Snatch (each character freezes mid shot, an effect is added along with their name, and then the footage resumes).

This would cut to people playing a poker match… Everyone is dressed normally, but one guy is obviously dressed like the other men, smartly.

Again, the shot is cut back to the smart-guys… are now getting into the car… (We can use a jump cut here to show the car driving away)

This cuts back to the smartly dressed man, playing cards... who has obviously just won allot of chips, and sweeps the chips towards himself.

Now the car parks up and the men get out and start to walk towards the building that they are playing poker…

You see the man sweep the rest of the chip towards him, at which point another poker player starts going crazy and flips over the table, he then pulls out a gun. Quickly after, the men will open the door (could make it a garage door), with all guns blazed ready to kill everyone in there (except the nice man, of course)

That’s how I pictured it to be :)